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  • Title: Until Death Do Us Part
  • Author: Janel White
  • ISBN: -
  • Page: 119
  • Format: ebook
  • Dear Author,He s got the wrong guy I m the victim and someone is trying to kill me That body was left as a message, and I was only there because of the note He knows me He knows my body and my heart I thought he was falling for me How can he think I am capable of murder Photo Description Two men are in a hallway with small doors all around, one open The first man iDear Author,He s got the wrong guy I m the victim and someone is trying to kill me That body was left as a message, and I was only there because of the note He knows me He knows my body and my heart I thought he was falling for me How can he think I am capable of murder Photo Description Two men are in a hallway with small doors all around, one open The first man is sitting with hands behind his back like he is cuffed, and staring straight ahead with a blank expression on his face The second man is standing over the first He is wearing a police uniform that is form fitting The police officer is looking down at the first man and holding him in the chair with his hand.This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love s Landscapes event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended for adult readers It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some readers The M M Romance Group strongly recommends that each reader review the General Information section before each story for story tags as well as for content warnings.
    Until Death Do Us Part Dear Author He s got the wrong guy I m the victim and someone is trying to kill me That body was left as a message and I was only there because of the note He knows me He knows my body and my heart I

    One thought on “Until Death Do Us Part”

    1. Cutesy law enforcement story with suspense and a killer on the loose I will admit I chose to read this for the prison violence tag but it was over once it started Everything is solved, love prevails between an alpha cop and his lover Very sweet and romantic.No rating Thanks to the author and the team for the story.

    2. This was written from my prompt and it was EXACTLY what I asked for My apologies to Janel for taking so long to write this review I got slammed and then forgot Yes, I m terrible I love the characters, the plot, the drama and peril I LOVE danger and near death stuff and she gave me a lot of it I wish the story had been longer, but that s just because I enjoyed it so much The DRC events don t give authors a lot of time to write, and so short stories are the norm I hope she writes a full length nov [...]

    3. Okay premise, but the writing s not there Choppy, no real characterization, flat dialogue and that silliness where a guy gets beaten up and threatened with rape, but he s good to have sex the next day __

    4. Hot cops, love and DRAMA Super sweet tone even with a dead body and violence Liked the men and believed that with expansion it would be less frenetic and give the reader time to feel what the characters feel.

    5. Wow, what a fun short story It s sweet, sexy, intense and it will make you tear up before you finish reading The supporting characters are just as fun and interesting as the main characters The action twists and turns in very exciting and suspenseful directions My only complaint and my usual one with great short stories is that this could so easily be expanded into a really hot M M Romance novel Hint, hint Way to help me celebrate my 4th of July, with some m m fireworks and all Thanks.

    6. Heading up towards 3.5 starsGood contemporary mystery detective story When Jake receives an e mail allegedly from his police officer partner to meet up at an unknown address he goes along, only to find two murder victims It s his partner Paul that arrests him and not until he s in prison is it discovered that Jake definitely had nothing to do with it The pair are moved to a safe house, under the watch of two other police officers who have their own relationship just starting whilst the real murd [...]

    7. Something longer would have been better, especially with the ending It felt a bit rushed Still, it was an enjoyable story and I liked the characters.

    8. My biggest problem with this story is that there is a lot of telling instead of showing Scenes are explained by the author where they should have been expanded on It makes everything fly by at breakneck speed, leaving the reader no time to really connect with the characters The only scene that I felt had enough detail was the sex scene, which I skimmed because without any real investment in the characters, I didn t care about their bedroom antics There was no tension in a story that should have [...]

    9. 2.5 stars round up for author donating her time to write this story.I felt that the author had shortchanged the majority of police procedures in this story to fit what she had written It felt too high handed, for me, and a bit too much for my suspended disbelief.Some of the dialogues felt stiff while some others felt overwrought There were some parts that works that I felt that the parts that didn t overshadowed them for me.How Jake ended up in prison didn t work for me at all view spoiler Where [...]

    10. It was Ok so 2 stars, but not my thing.Sadly this just didn t work for me It felt rather choppy plotwise view spoiler arrested, somehow sent straight to prison, beat up, rescued, safe house, sex in safe house with buddy cops in next room right after arrest and beating hide spoiler It was all too staccato and I couldn t get into the story properly I kept thinking it wasn t right and so it jarred me from the reading zone Also the sub plot romance was unnecessary and merely added to my disassociati [...]

    11. Rating overviewWriting Story Characters Overall 4 Chapeau Ms White for a very decent mystery debut I have to say this story is very basic in plot and lacks some attention to detail but overall I really enjoyed it Another Love s Landscapes that should totally be turned into a full length

    12. First off this is a first time pub for a first time author so well done on that The story and plot are well put together, but lacked the emotional depth needed for this kind of story.Though some part remind me of a few other stories I read, I still found the it entertaining A good solid 3 star read

    13. Offered for FREE from the M M Romance Group s Love s Landscapes event Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated

    14. Paul arrested his lover for murder of course he didn t do it but things pointed to that way After this trust has been broken and now can they mend what has been broken And with the help of fellow cops will they find the real killer

    15. STORY INFO Genre contemporaryTags law enforcement, fetish toys, abduction stalking, tearjerker, revenge, suspense, mysteryContent Warnings graphic violence, prison violenceWord Count 11,087

    16. Kind of like a two for one this is a great story of love prevailing in the face of misunderstanding and the need to rebuild trust in relationship that is only just establishing itself.Drama, suspense and interesting characters that ooze sex appeal, a worthwhile short read, for sure.

    17. To have such a short story split between two couples took away from the main couple Plus I didn t really believe the bad guy or in the police procedures I didn t really connect with the characters at all.

    18. NOTE I rate most writing event stories free reads 4 or 5 stars because of my appreciation of the author s participation and gift.

    19. This was an interesting read with lots of potential but it was rushly written and the emotional parts were predictable and too cheesy

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